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Journal Entry: Fri Nov 13, 2009, 12:09 PM
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just got the most amazing review on [link] from =dark--romance~
And here it is:

"With such a short shot at a fic, it would naturally be hard to get across anything too endearing into the emotional scale. But seemingly not for you.
Yet again, you've impressed and shocked me, and made me 200x more envious of you than before.

In the nine lines of that fic, you practically laid out the whole meaning of what is Style. Sure, Style is an abused pairing, and there is only so often you can reel them around with the same storyline. Stan is with Wendy, Kyle is jealous, etc. But most put the story across like it is Kyle in the bad, and Stan doesn't want to be with her.

I really love how you shook that up a bit, making Stan want to be with Wendy and just being the simple jock he is. You really make a reader imagine the story, imagine Kyle comforting Stan when Wendy makes him upset. But the fact that Stan really does love Wendy, and has no idea Kyle feels this way is what makes your nine lines seem to say everythng they possibly could.

You can tell, without even knowing the South Park fandom, that Stan and Kyle are best friends, and Kyle cares about Stan more than anything. Without making the reader hate Wendy you've set a sense of sorrow for Kyle, but implied that he's been keeping the secret a while and not even daring to drop hints.

I'm so bloody envious of your writing talents. If you ever have doubts about yourself, this should be enough to make you see how talented you are.

To fit that much emotion and hard hitting facts and painful things the characters have to live with in NINE LINES.. it's plain to see you have talent.

It's amazing.
Period."

That's cheered me up so much xD

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Perry "Dr Cox" Cox:

"Relationships don't work the way they do on television and in the movies. Will they? Won't they? And then they finally do, and they're happy forever. Gimme a break. Nine out of ten of them end because they weren't right for each other to begin with, and half of the ones who get married get divorced anyway, and I'm telling you right now, through all this stuff I have not become a cynic. I haven't. Yes, I do happen to believe that love is mainly about pushing chocolate covered candies and, y'know, in some cultures, a chicken. You can call me a sucker, I don't care, because I do believe in it. Bottom line is: it's couples who are truly right for each other wade through the same crap as everybody else, but the big difference is they don't let it take them down. One of those two people will stand up and fight for that relationship every time. If it's right, and they're real lucky, one of them will say something."

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  • Interests: South Park ;D
  • Favourite movie: All Saws.
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  • Favourite artist: Sulo.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Jodi Picoult.
  • Favourite cartoon character: Kyle Broflovski + Eric Cartman - SP
  • Personal Quote: If you lost your arms and you were Craig, you would be soooooo pissed.

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:iconquipi:
Wow, I love your icon! *needs to get mi-self one*

ANND thank you so much for the fav! I really appreciate it!
:iconkirby-lou:
Thanks For The :+fav:!

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:iconmillyhouse:
taa for the fave. x

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Oh hey~
Thanks for the fav and watch <3
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Thanks for the watch!:heart:

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:iconxkayoni:
OH MY GOD!
EARL?

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thank you for fav and watch!
I add you, tooXD★
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Thanks for the fav~ <3

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